There is something spitefully gleeful about telling a class you’re
beginning study of poetry. As a teacher, you wait for the groans - the hyperbolic
sighs – and allow yourself the smug warmth of a wry side-smile… for many an
experienced English teacher will know that this much maligned genre is a source
of joy for both teachers and students alike.
Maybe it’s the way most poems are able to fit snugly in the one hour study
of a lesson; good poetry lessons sparkle in the grey of a Monday or else like snipers
puncture the monotony of the school day. Forgotten is ‘progress over time’ when
your class devour a poem whole in the twinkling of sixty minutes, and leave,
satiated.
I would argue that reading poetry has the self-satisfaction of cracking
a puzzle: for the A Level Media teachers out there, it’s Barthes’ enigma code or
Altman’s pleasures of the intellectual puzzle transposed into literary form.
Watching students’ pride in calling forth meaning from words that they had previously
seen as meaning-less is like watching Faustus swell with hubris as he first conjured
Mephastophilis. Only in a classroom there’ll be no inconvenient dragging off to
hell, for this is a magic trick given not by the devil but by damn good learning
and teaching.
Beyond acronyms of SMSC, poetry is a chance to philosophise, test out
perspectives, and form a world view. Teaching teenagers how to read poetry
seems like an utterly devious act when you find yourself traversing sex, philosophy,
religion, and gender politics all in the space of five minutes*.
So it makes sense to me - despite the simplistic lure of AQA’s common
sense AOs – not to start teaching of a poem by coldly looking at a set of
criteria. No, this is a time to be impatient. When teaching a new poem start
with the very best bit: the nugget; the germ; the gem.
Start with the best words (before considering why they’re in the best
order). Start with the real toads (before picking apart the imaginary gardens
they sit in).
To give a more tangible example, we can turn to the first two poems in AQA’s
new ‘Love and Relationships’ anthology. For ‘When We Two Parted’ this nucleus can
be found in the title. A swift parsing of the words via post-it notes will
allow students to reveal for themselves the ‘crux’ of Byron’s biographical yearning
for his lover at the end of their secret affair:
Parted The emotive verb indicates a separation: the end of
a relationship.
We Two The collective pronoun and number
symbolise a happier time of togetherness.
When The past tense evokes a melancholy
tone and sense of nostalgia.
And, yes, as the teacher, I can then plug in the gaps, give ‘her’ a
name (and what a name), and support students in tracing the patterns that
reinforce these ideas in the rest of the poem.
In Shelley’s ‘Love’s Philosophy’ this centre can be found by sifting
out the verbs (mingle, mix, meet, kiss, clasp) and adding a couple of short prompts.
What does it
mean to be a couple? Are you truly one or truly two?
Is the
narrative persona male or female? What are the implications of your decision?*
And, yes, again, I can then connect them to the Romantics and Shelley’s
turbulent love life. But not before. Not before they’ve shaken the meaning
loose from the branches themselves.
In teaching poems I always come back – groggily, groggily – to the excitement
of the first time I taught Chris Hildrew’s lesson Plath’s ‘Mushrooms’. Try it
yourself: remove the title and give the poem to your Year 7 students. Allow
students to form their own ideas, using evidence to support their blossoming interpretations.
Then reveal the title (and Plath’s demons). I’ve created my own ode to this
lesson using Plath’s ‘Metaphors’: students draw the images in the poem and you watch
the pennies drop before exploding their minds by revealing the final line.
If we steal these moments of discovery from our children through direct
instruction and the idea we can ever wholly ‘know’ (read: tie down, commodify, ‘own’)
a poem’s meaning we take away something so much more than a few gained minutes of
teaching time. There is a danger the art of exploratory teaching will become a
Lost Art as we regurgitate factoids and turn to page 67 in a text book.
I will give students the trowel, the spade, and help them navigate the
wilderness of a poem’s landscape. But I will not be the one to dig on their
behalf.
Let your students be Indiana Jones for once, taking risks as they
discover.
Hey - This is quite a compelling take on teaching poetry. I am wondering if you would be willing to send along a PPT to model the teaching of a poem in an hour. Admittingly, in my teaching infancy it's something I struggle with, defaulting to formulaic 'step-by-step' analysis. My email is: michaeljosephjansen@gmail.com
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